As I mentioned in my last post about a month ago, I’ve been learning to use new notation software, Dorico. Since the late 1980’s I’ve been mostly using Finale for all my music notation and I’d gotten quite used to it. But now that Finale has been sunset and is longer being supported, I’ve pretty much completely switched to using Dorico instead.
Now that I’ve been using Dorico for a while I’m starting to get more comfortable with using it. I feel that once I’ve got a slightly better handle on it that I’m going to like it better than Finale. Dorico has a number of features that I find superior to Finale. For example, laying out the final parts for printing seems to go much faster than on Finale. Dorico does a much better job of automatically spacing out the staves and avoiding collisions (for the most part). Note entry also works better for me as I can play a chord on my keyboard and Dorico will remember what I just played so I can take my hands off the keyboard and press the rhythmic value on my computer keyboard, which was harder to work with in Finale’s Speedy Note Entry.
I haven’t used Sibelius or Musescore really, so I can’t compare Dorico to those programs, but my recommendation for former Finale users is that Dorico is a good option.
I did go through a couple of Dorico’s tutorials to get started, but I figured the best way to learn how to use the software for my needs was to jump in and complete some projects. After last month’s saxophone quartet commission was completed I began working on a new composition for big band. Here’s a MIDI realization of the completed chart.
So like many of my composition, the title is stupid (Finale was discontinued, so this is called Sunset Finale, get it?). The sound libraries I used in the above demo, however, is pretty cool, I think. I purchased Atomic Big Band Horns to use for all the horn sounds, excepting the solos. While I’ve been having some playback issues with this project that caused some notes to not play long enough or too long, I was able to come up with a workaround for this demo. So all the prewritten horn parts are using the Atomic Big Band Horns sound library, while the rhythm section and soloists are audio exports from Band-in-a-Box and use that software’s samples. It’s a pretty nice end result for a demo recording.
I’ve already sent it to the current music director of the Asheville Jazz Orchestra and we’ll probably debut this chart next month.
By now it’s old news that Finale has been sunset and it is no longer being support. The last time I checked, Finale was still running on my computer, but it is only a matter of time before it won’t and I have many compositions and arrangements that exist as Finale files. I decided that it would be a good idea to go ahead and get started as soon as possible with new software for notation.
I’ve been a Finale user since 1989, I believe, when as an undergraduate I took a class in computer applications with music in the brand new computer lab. I believe it was Finale 2.0 that we used and I’ve been using Finale ever since. After some research I decided to go with Dorico. It’s been very frustrating at times trying to figure out how to do certain things on Dorico that are easy for me with Finale. Some of the most frustrating things about Dorico are how certain things are just a little bit different from what I’m used to. For example, the key command for a quarter note on Finale is “5,” but on Dorico that is “6.” One of the things that I like very much about Dorico is that you can customize things like key commands, so once I’m more used to the software I’ll start setting some of those up.
The best way for me to learn the new software has been to simply jump in cold turkey and use it for a project. Coincidentally, I got asked to write an arrangement again for Lenoir Sax (I’ve done a bunch of writing for them) for their Christmas concert. They asked for O Come, O Come Emmanuel in a latin groove feel. I’ve previously arranged a big band chart on this tune, so I borrowed a little bit from that but with a different groove for this arrangement it was pretty easy to come up with some new ideas. Here’s a MIDI realization of the completed arrangement.
Just a quick post. Hurricane Helene came through Asheville, but we’re doing fine. We’re very fortunate, it’s mostly just been a big inconvenience to us so far.
A recent topic on the Trumpet Herald forum spun off into a discussion of tooth structure and how it influences a brass musician’s embouchure. The thread mentioned some research on the topic that I wasn’t already familiar with, so I did some digging and ended up finding a newer paper from 2012, The Relationship of Oral Anatomy and Trumpet Performance: Prediction of Physical Talent by H. Zeynep Cilingir.
Cilingir got access to some very advanced dental imaging equipment and designed a very good study to look at trumpet players’ anatomical features and looked for correlations between playing characteristics and dental anatomy. My own dissertation looked in part at this topic and my results here were inconclusive. Cilingir’s research did find some interesting results.
I’ve blogged about this topic before, particularly in relation to the ideas of Matty Shiner (here and here). Shiner would tell students who didn’t have what he considered to be an “ideal” tooth structure for brass playing to undergo an orthodontic procedure.
There are several problematic issues, which I go into detail on the earlier blog posts. Briefly, Shiner never published his research and what we know about it from interviews he gave would almost certainly not get IRB approval. There are massive ethical and even legal concerns with how he went about this.
Red flags aside, that doesn’t mean that his ideas weren’t correct. Cilingir’s paper took a good look at Shiner’s ideas and found some interesting things.
In this research, the relationship between the rotation angle of the central incisors (Inter-incisal Rotation) and performance skills was analyzed in order to further investigate the Shiner brothers’ theory. The results showed an association between Inter-incisal Rotation Angle and Flexibility; participants with a more pronounced “V” shape between the central incisors received higher scores from Flexibility A and B exercises. However, no significant association was found between the Inter-incisal Rotation Angle and High Range or Endurance scores as hypothesized by the Shiners and Franks.
– Cilingir, p. 65
So there was a positive association with lip flexibility and the V shape Shiner felt was ideal, but there was no relationship between that dental structure and high range or endurance. Interestingly, Cilingir didn’t find any relationship between high range and daily practice or years of experience either.
Cilingir also find some relationship between the amount of space in the back of the mouth (Inter-molar Width measurements) and certain types of tonguing. Subjects with a wider back part of the mouth tended to do better with multiple tonguing and flutter tonguing. There wasn’t any correlation found between the general alignment of the upper teeth and any playing characteristics, although there was a statistically significant correlation between well-aligned lower teeth along with multiple tonguing and flutter tonguing as well.
Pretty much all of the anatomical features that Cilingir looked at were characteristics that come from what I think are mostly “arm chair” speculation. Like a lot of thoughts on brass embouchure, many players and teachers describe what they think they are doing, and then leap to the assumption that not only is that how they actually play, but is also the best way for everyone. Cilingir’s paper is, to my knowledge, the best serious look at whether the speculation holds water.
Other dental characteristics Cilingir examined included:
Overjet
Inclination of the first molars (the molars are said by some to “support facial muscles at the side of the mouth”)
Slightly protruded and wider teeth
There wasn’t a relationship found between the above bullet points and any trumpet skills.
Almost every brass musician who has had some dental work done knows that the tooth structure is an important part of the brass embouchure. The support of the teeth and gums underneath the lips and mouthpiece rim is a vital part of embouchure technique and when an alteration is made it usually requires some time to adjust technique accordingly. Sometimes the playing is immediately better as a result of dental work too.
However, that doesn’t mean that anyone has the inside track on what dental characteristics relate to good brass playing. Even Cilingir was very careful to qualify the findings several times. Here’s one example:
However, none of the results of this study should be considered conclusive. After all, music performance is a combination of numerous aspects of human mind and body, which are full of endless capabilities. I believe that anyone, regardless of their physical makeup, can succeed becoming an excellent performer with enough determination.
– Cilingir, p. v
Someday I hope that we’ll have a much more accurate understanding of how anatomical features influence brass technique, but we’re not really very close yet. Before we can get there we not only want to pin down the dental characteristics Cilingir looked at, but also learn how those features are influenced by things like lip size and texture, oral cavity size and shape, tongue size and shape, the degree of the musician’s malocclusion, and more. Not to mention the variables of what embouchure type the player is using and whether or not they are playing correctly that way.
Anyone who recommends specific dental work in order to improve brass technique almost certainly doesn’t know what they are talking about. If you need to adjust your teeth, do so under the recommendation of a dental professional and do not expect it to make for any improvements in your brass playing.
Brad Goode is an amazing musician. You’re probably most likely to know about his jazz trumpet playing. He’s also an excellent composer and bassist. He has also struggled a number of times with injuries to his lips that have seriously hindered his trumpet players.
Recently I came across a video podcast series, Trust the Process, that is devoted to helping musicians deal with injuries related to playing their instruments. Episode 4 is an interview with Brad Goode.
Here are a couple of quotes from the video that I found particularly interesting or insightful.
Understanding good brass technique and preventing injury go hand in hand.
For those who prefer not to think about brass technique, this is the best argument I can think for why you should understand brass technique.
There are many, many brass teachers not teaching embouchure. And not dealing with the subject of embouchure but believing in a magical thinking system where if you just imagine the results strong enough everything will be perfect and you won’t need to know anything about embouchure.
I find it truly amazing how many intelligent, well-intentioned, and experience brass teachers and players buy into this “think system” approach. And many are quite defensive if you point out the absurdity of it. And as Brad mentions, more players than not who get injured have been indoctrinated into this idea.
There are a few things he says that I question or disagree with. For example, while Brad is correct that different brass instruments require different approaches, I’ve found that the basic principles apply to all and they are more similar than many give credit. But I imagine that if we discussed these differences and similarities in person we’d find we’re more aligned than not here.
The whole interview is interesting and worth watching. I will definitely be checking out more of the Trust the Process series.
I had meant to post this last Saturday, on “Star Wars Day” itself, but forgot in all the excitement.
I happened to have a show with the band Ska City that afternoon. Since we were playing on May 4th, we wanted to do something a little special for the sci fi fans who came out. I wrote a medley arrangement of three Star Wars themes in a ska style. It included the Imperial March, Cantina Band, and the Main Theme. I think it ended up OK. Here’s a demo I put together for the band to learn it from (most of the rhythm section prefers to learn tunes by ear, rather than sheet music, go figure).
There may be a video recording floating around of us playing it. We warmed up on it on a previous gig as well as while sound checking last Saturday. On the actual show there was a major time glitch on the last tune, so it’s not the best performance we had at it. Hopefully we’ll play some other year on May 4 so we can use this chart again. It was a lot of work just for one silly tune on one gig.
Yesterday I attended the North Carolina Trombone Festival, held at Appalachian State University this year. It was a wonderful time. I heard two very fine trombone choirs perform, the ASU Trombone Choir and the Charlotte Trombone Collective. The Performer’s Showcase Recital featured a number of the guest artists and most performed pieces I wasn’t familiar with already. I got to meet some colleagues from around North Carolina that I haven’t met before and also finally met a couple of teachers face to face for the first time.
There were also some workshops and I gave a presentation on brass embouchure technique and pedagogy in the morning session. While preparing for this I spent some time practicing it and recorded myself. Here is one practice session, unedited, but I think that it will get the points across pretty well. I didn’t write out everything I planned to say. Instead I had some bullet points of things I wanted to say in my presenters notes (as well as on the slides) and spoke about them off the cuff. I think that this makes a live presentation feel more natural, but on video it perhaps comes across better to recite something prewritten. What do you think?
At any rate, here is the practice session for anyone who is interested but wasn’t able to attend the festival or went to another workshop at the same time.
If you’ve read through some of my embouchure materials I’ve already posted here you’ll recognize the discussion as well as many of the examples I use. But it’s possible that this format and organization works well for some people as an introduction or review.
This Saturday, April 13, 2024 I’m attending the North Carolina Trombone Festival, as I mentioned last month. My presentation on brass embouchure technique and pedagogy will happen at 10 AM that morning.
Coming up next month, on April 13, 2024, I will be presenting at the North Carolina Trombone Festival. I will be giving an presentation on brass embouchure technique titled “Brass Embouchures: A Guide for Teachers and Players” at 10 AM.
The boilerplate release forms that I received to participate this year mention live streaming. If the event is streamed or recorded, I will be sure to post links here for folks who might want to tune in.
Regardless of whether it is going to be streamed, I will practice the presentation (in part so I can be sure to get through everything in the allotted 45 minutes) and will probably record my practice. If I get a decent practice recording I’ll post it too, so even if the NCTF doesn’t record or stream it you’ll be able to watch it later.
Recently I got to play an extremely fun big band show where every chart we performed was composed by someone in the band. We performed a couple of my own compositions as well as many by some of the best big band writers in my area. All in all, it was a very rewarding musical experience, but there were some issues with a lot of the parts we played that took away valuable rehearsal time and at times during the performance the music suffered.
Coincidentally, a friend recently posted on social media about struggling to get his charts to sound the way he envisioned. The ensuing discussion seemed to focus largely on the notation software that was being used, but in my opinion that’s putting the cart before the horse. I feel that most composers and arrangers who are finding their music isn’t being performed well is due to the music not being notated well. Even experienced composers and arrangers often underestimate the time and effort they need to take to make sure that the musicians are getting all the information they need to play the music correctly without cluttering up their sheet music.
While it’s best to teach students by describing what to do, rather than what not to do, I pulled some real-world examples of music that have notation problems so that I could demonstrate how I would prefer to to notate the same thing. Some of this music is drawn from my own music, but some are from other composers. I’ve made all the same errors I’m going to complain about here and will make some of them again. This list is by no means definitive, but are common mistakes that deserve an arranger’s attention prior to the first rehearsal.
Not Notating the Style
All the musicians need to know from the beginning what the style (and tempo) of the composition is. There’s a big difference between swing and straight 8th note feel. If your musicians are going to get a look at the music in advance and rehearse in advance they need to know what style to play in and how fast to practice it.
At the show I mentioned above we took time out of our rehearsal so one composer could inform the rhythm section about sections that were straight 8th note and swing 8th note feels. That should have been marked in the parts already. And all the musicians should have that indicated, not just the rhythm section.
Here’s an example of how I like to notate drum parts. The groove is clearly notated so the drummer knows whether to play in 2 or 4. The second measure shows a hit the band makes while the fourth measure indicates that the drummer should play that exact rhythm. I gave the drummer a cue of who is playing at letter E to make the part easier to follow.
All the musicians should know when the style changes, not just the rhythm section.
Not Notating Articulations Correctly
I’ve found this to be a more serious issue with rhythm section players who are writing for horns, but even horn players often don’t notate the articulations correctly. Here are some examples.
The above image is from a chart where the current feel is swing 8th notes. The trouble the musicians will run into here is whether to play the quarter notes long or short. In a swing context, quarter notes are usually played short, butwe ended up settling on playing them long in this passage. I always notate an articulation on quarter notes in a jazz chart because there is that question of long or short quarter notes. For short notes you can mark them staccato (short, not particularly accented) or use the “roof-top” accent (short and accented). For long quarter notes I would use a tenuto (dash) marking, but I also will often also put a slur or phrase marking over the passage.
In this example there are two things I would correct. First, I would eliminate the tie across the bar line and put an 8th rest on the downbeat of the second measure. It is marked to be played short, but there is a visual discrepancy that players will get in this situation. Tied notes like this tend to be misinterpreted as long.
The tie across the middle of the second measure is perfect, since it’s indicated to be played full value. The only thing I would change about this passage is to pull the tenuto marking up above the staff. Depending on the software you’re using, that may be as simple as checking a box somewhere. When articulations are written inside the staff it can be easy to miss it as part of the tie.
Here’s another example of quarter notes that need articulations. The one accent we get is inconsistent and I get the impression that the lack of articulations here were the arranger’s oversight.
Successive quarter notes on the offbeat like this can be problematic for the musicians to play if the articulations aren’t indicated. It seems to be almost as common for this sort of rhythm (in a swing context) to be played with long quarter notes as with short quarter notes. Arrangers need to help their musicians understand what is wanted.
Depending on the answer to the question, long or short, I might also prefer to notate them as 8th note offbeats instead. Or make the middle off beat two 8ths tied together so that the middle of the measure is visually indicated.
From the same chart, the above excerpt has the quarter note articulated with accents. This implies they should be played long, but I would prefer a double articulation here instead, a tenuto marking with an accent above it. It makes the length of those quarter note unambiguous.
I would also change the accidentals at the end of the above excerpt, for what it’s worth. The musician is going to be thinking in flats the measure before, best to stick with an implied flat key there for the individual musician, even if the underlying chord or key center implies sharps.
The main problem with the above excerpt is that the first measure is missing an 8th note. It turns out there should be an 8th note rest at the beginning of this measure, but when I first read through this chart I assumed there was a dotted quarter note on the 3rd beat. It’s really easy for arrangers to miss stuff like this in their parts, you have to take the time to go through each part carefully and even then things slip by.
Legato or staccato? The fact that the offbeats are written as ties across the barline suggest long, but with limited rehearsal times (or sight reading on the gig) the arranger should let the musicians know.
The above image is an excerpt from a ballad. I wanted to show this as one example of how we can be clearer with how the passage should be articulated. There are tenuto marks above the quarter nots as well as a slur to indicate the passage should be played legato.
This is an example of what I’m guessing is the arranger notating the parts for the computer playback, not for a real musician. I know from playing this chart many times that the articulations for the first two measures are “short, long, short.” It would read much better to write the first beat as a quarter note with a roof-top or a staccato, the second beat with a tenuto, and the 3rd beat again with the roof-top or staccato marking. If you want a staccato quarter note use an articulation, don’t notate as an 8th note followed by an 8th rest.
Here’s how I would like to see that passage.
Here’s another example with the same issue. I’m sure that when the computer plays back this passage it sounds fine, but the last note in the excerpt below should have been written as a quarter note with a roof-top or staccato marking above.
Here’s how I would notate the above.
Above is another example of the accents on quarter note without any indication of full value or staccato length to the quarter notes. My reasoning at the time was that if I put in roof-top accents they would get played shorter than I wanted in this particular passage. I wanted these quarter notes played a bit longer, but not full value. In retrospect I probably should have written them as roof-top accents and then indicated with text above that these notes should be played “fat.”
Again, I believe that arrangers should ALWAYS mark quarter note articulations for jazz-style charts. There’s too much room for different interpretations otherwise and it will make your music sound sloppy if everyone doesn’t play it the same way.
Not Writing Horns Idiomatically
The above excerpt from a trombone part isn’t unplayable high, but it is unnecessarily so. In this particular passage there were trumpets also playing the exact same notes. In the context of this passage I believe that this particular line sounds much better on trumpet and this trombone part should have either been dropped down an octave, revoiced so that the part was covering different notes in the chord in a range more comfortable on trombone, or left out. This composer did suggest to brass to play some of the lines down an octave if we wanted, so I think he had been informed that his writing for brass is a bit too high for comfort.
A lot of the notation software today will give you warnings if you exceed the range of the instrument. Finale has a setting so that you can check ranges for beginning, intermediate, and advanced players. If you don’t happen to play that instrument or know its capabilities well enough this can help you avoid writing passages like above.
One of the best things a composer and arranger can do is to ask a friend or colleague to play a passage for you so that you can hear what it sounds like. Often times less experienced arrangers will write something for an instrument that is technically possible to play, but because of the range, dynamic, tempo, etc. it will sound rough or not appropriate for the desired musical effect.
Taking “methods” classes in college (Woodwind Methods, Strings Methods, etc.) for music education majors is a great way for composers and arrangers to learn how to write more idiomatically for the various instruments. Perhaps even more so than the orchestration classes I’ve taken.
When I was a grad student we had Bill Prince visit and play as a guest artist for a jazz festival. The charts he sent for us to play were all written by him. Because he plays all the instruments very well he understands each of those instruments and what they can play. None of his parts were difficult to play, but his charts all sounded great.
Study the capabilitiesof the instruments you’re writing for and write your parts accordingly.
Not Proofing Parts Carefully
It’s very easy to miss little stuff in your parts. I don’t always do so, but sometimes after I have the parts printed I’ll actually play through every part myself. I almost always find something I missed this way.
Here is another example of the arranger missing some stuff that needed better proofing before the parts were printed. In the first ending there is that last 16th note. I know from playing this chart and from other sections in this part that this was a copy and paste mistake. The lick just before the first ending is played in other parts of the chart and then the 16th note is followed by a note on the downbeat. The arranger copied and pasted the lick, but forgot to take out the 16th note in this particular context. When you copy and paste using notation software be aware of things like this.
The notation above isn’t too bad, but you need to make sure all elements on the page are not overlapping each other. The tempo and style change above got placed overlapping with the rehearsal letter. This will happen commonly with chord symbols, which can make it difficult or impossible for the musician to tell what chord to play.
Be sure to space your parts out so that you don’t end up with accidentals overlapping noteheads like above. Is the downbeat of count three a sharp or a natural? What if the light isn’t too good or the musician’s eyesight isn’t so clear?
Think carefully about how you notate accidentals. It’s typically best to notate all flats or all sharps (or naturals, when needed), rather than mixing them. A general rule of thumb is if the line ascends you will want to use charts and if the line descends use flats. But sometimes it’s better to notate an ascending line with flats, if it follows a particular scale using flats, for example.
It’s absolutely not necessary for the notated pitch in a horn part to match what is considered correct for the chord. Avoid this:
The trombone part above is an Eb and then a measure later a D#. Best to keep the notated pitch consistent. Here’s another example of what to avoid.
The A# above should be notated as a Bb. Doing so keeps the whole phrase with flats, making it much easier to read.
This trombone part needs a courtesy accidental on the F# on count 4. The trombonists who have played this chart before remember, but almost every time a new player sight reads this chart that accidental gets missed.
I should have marked a rehearsal marking at the double bar above. I meant to, I just forgot and it got left out. This particular excerpt is a solo section that can be opened for more soloists and indications for backgrounds at different times. A rehearsal letter there allows the music director to be clearer on when players should cover background figures in the rehearsal or just by calling an audible on the show.
Confusing Rhythmic Notation
Consider the above excerpt again and notice the off beat quarter notes are written so that the middle of the measure is obscured. In 4/4 meter it is best to notate the rhythms to break up the middle of the measure clearly.
This example shows how I prefer to both rhythmically notate off beat figures as well as the articulations I like to use. It is unambiguous that the quarter notes should be played short and accented, with the roof-top accents. The second measure of the example clearly divides the measure into half and clearly shows the upbeats. Compare the following three measure, ALL would be played the same, but the last measure is easier to sight read.
The first measure is harder to read because all the short quarter notes fall on the offbeats and it is harder to tell where the middle of the measure is. You could notate it like this:
But that also is harder to sight read than the 3rd measure above. The tie across the middle of the measure does break up the middle of the measure rhythmically, which is better than notating as a quarter note. But ties like that will tend to get played too long on a quick read, even if the articulation marking is correct. If you want full value quarter notes it would be find, but I would still mark tentuto articulations above all the quarter notes because it will otherwise not be clear.
The second measure and third measure are both the same, excepting the beaming. I rarely see beams across rests as it shows in the second measure above (especially in jazz notation) and feel that beaming across rests like this is harder to read than if you notate it like the third measure.
The above excerpt is confusing because what we see above isn’t 3 and 1/2 beats of rest followed by the two 16th notes. Those 16th notes before A are pickups. Most of the band in this chart have a measure of rest before A. When the pickups aren’t written correctly it can lead to much confusion from the band and make for a sloppy start to your chart. Arrangers need to correctly notate pickup beats so that the rests are eliminated from the parts. Parts that don’t cover the pickup beats should have the specific pickup notated as a rest, but not the additional rests. See the following example.
Poorly Notated Rhythm Section Parts
Horn players should take some time to study rhythm section parts and be sure to give those musicians all the information they need to be able to sight read the chart well. Very often these parts are just a sea of slash notation without much information. Rhythm section players need to have dynamics, cues, rhythmic hits, articulations, style changes, etc. written clearly into their parts.
The above image is a longer excerpt from a drum part that shows some examples of decent notation, but there are also some things that need to be fixed. One thing I tried to do is make it obvious how the phrases line up, each system of music is 8 measure long and is easy to follow. Letter J and K above I could have put the numbers of measures played above to make it even more obvious that it is an 8 measure phrase.
The spacing of the above excerpt needs cleaning up. The rehearsal letters and measure numbers overlap for K and L, making it harder to tell what they say. Also notice that the dynamic marking for the measure before L should be pushed up a bit off the hits on the system below. The spacing with some of the measures is odd so that the slash notation ended up being spaced strangely.
Something I’ve seen other arrangers do for drum parts is to have something that looks a bit like a multi-measure rest with indication to play time for that number of measure. It’s a bit awkward to put that together in Finale, the software I use, but I have done that in the past and really should do so more often. It goes a long way to making a drum part easier to read and fewer pages.
Again, the hits the drummer needs to know about are notated up on the top of the staff, but I also notated some hits on the bottom of the staff. The hits on the bottom happen in the low end of the horns, so I notated them that way to make it clearer to the drummer that the hits in those spots happens between different ranges. Here’s another example from a different chart.
When I write specific notes and rhythms on a piano (or guitar) part I will usually also provide chord symbols for them. The musician might not play the exact voicing I want, but with the chord symbols provided they can more easily play the top note of the voicing and then play the rhythm you want. Another way of writing this, if you want your musician to come up with their own voicings, is to simply write the top note of the voicing and chord symbols with the text “T.N.O.V.” above.
But in the above example I wanted the pianist to play exactly what was written because it matches what the trombone section is playing later (and also at the same time in different parts of the chart).
Three problems with this excerpt. There is a dynamic marking missing at J and while it may seem obvious when you consider what happens before it and what the rest of the band is doing, but it is supposed to be soft. In retrospect I would notate the 3rd measure so that the quarter not is instead an 8th note followed by a rest. In this particular section the rhythm section drops out and the horns play without them, which in retrospect I might have notated with “rhythm out” written above the first measure.
Learn Accepted Notation Practice
Entire books have been written on notation and music engraving, but you don’t need to purchase an expensive book to improve your abilities at notating your music. Studying published scores and parts is helpful here. There are also many excellent internet resources to help less experienced composers and arrangers learn how to properly notate your music.
Laying out your scores and individual parts is probably one of the more tedious parts of being a composer and arranger, but it’s a skill that is more than worth the effort it takes. Be aware that it will take longer than you anticipate, so you really can’t just print out your parts when the composing and arranging work is done and expect that the musicians are going to do your music justice. Poorly written sheet music will sound worse with musicians sight reading. It takes valuable rehearsal time to make corrections to parts or for musicians to ask questions because their parts aren’t clear.
No matter how wonderful and creative your original music is, it won’t sound good if the musicians don’t fully understand how it is supposed to be played on their first read through. This is even more important if the musicians need to sight read the music on the gig or if they have limited rehearsal time to learn it.